Very nice story Alvin.From the looks of it you like minecraft, so do I. Some improvements you could make is grammar try to make your story sound better. Overall a very good story which shows your likes and interests. keep up the good work!
Very nice story Alvin.From the looks of it you like minecraft, so do I. Some improvements you could make is grammar try to make your story sound better. Overall a very good story which shows your likes and interests. keep up the good work!
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