I think you did a good job and tried your best, I like how you mixed a movie and some pirates and the navy together and made a story. I think you should put more descriptive words in your story, so your story could be a bit longer.
I think you did a good job and tried your best, I like how you mixed a movie and some pirates and the navy together and made a story. I think you should put more descriptive words in your story, so your story could be a bit longer.
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